So I'm just going to listen to the audio comments and comment about them as I go.
Oops I'd forgotten about using "proper" on the first page. You told me to take it out and I didn't. My bad.
I'm glad the part about syntactical patterns was good, I was quite proud of my analysis there.
My bad again with the wrong formatting of the long quotation, I forgot to look it up.
About the "diverse and realistic creation" part, I think I had something else there that was similar but I changed it to what it is now.
Overall, I agree with all of your comments about things that could have been changed but I'm happy with both my grade and my paper.
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